Want to Try it Out?Ch53 - Intermission: Hotel/Spa (2)

Lubed fingers went back to Ye Xun’s behind. Chang Min quickly slipped a finger inside. He wanted to slowly move inside, but once the heat surrounded his finger, his patience snapped. He started moving his finger in and out, stretching Ye Xun before swiftly adding another finger. 

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Ye Xun groaned, his nails digging into Chang Min’s shoulder as he groaned. He leaned forward once more, his head barely an inch away as he breathed against Chang Min’s lips. “Eager, aren’t we?” 

 

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Chang Min chuckled before capturing Ye Xun’s lips. His lips were tempting him by being so close. They made out as Ye Xun rocked his hips into Chang Min’s fingers. His length rubbed against Chang Min’s stomach, causing him to moan out from the friction. 

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Swallowing the moan down, Chang Min added another finger, filling Ye Xun’s hole as he stretched him more and more. The kiss grew sloppy as Ye Xun slipped his free hand towards Chang Min’s nipple, rubbing his thumb in a circle on it. 

 

Fuck. Chang Min cursed in his mind as his free hand clenched Ye Xun’s left cheek, spreading it as his fingers from his other hand tilted up. They hit Ye Xun’s sweet spot, causing Ye Xun to pull away from the kiss as he cried out. 

 

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Chang Min abused the spot, hitting it repeatedly, causing Ye Xun to see stars. “Shi-ah, stop.” Ye Xun cried out. 

 

Stopping, Chang Min rubbed his fingers over the spot before slowly pulling out, causing Ye Xun to whimper from the loss. “I want you in me already.” Ye Xun let out, resting his sweaty forehead on Chang Min’s shoulder. 

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Slightly picking up his hips, Chang Min rubbed his leaking, throbbing member between Ye Xun’s cheeks before his tip poked at Ye Xun’s hole. 

 

He grabbed the man’s behind with both hands, pulling them apart as he slowly pushed his tip inside the hole. 

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Ye Xun’s hole stretched around his tip, taking him in as Chang Min pushed more inches into the Ye Xun. 

 

Breathing hard, Chang Min rested his head back. He wanted to watch Ye Xun’s hole engulf his rigid length, but the sheer pleasure of being inside him drove him crazy. 

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Taking a second to himself, Ye Xun rocked his hips, enjoying the way Chang Min’s member rubbed against his sweet spot, teasing it. 

 

“Ye Xun,” Chang Min cried out, his fingers digging into Ye Xun’s behind before he pulled Ye Xun up and pushed him back down. 

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“Ah!” Ye Xun’s hands held onto Chang Min’s chest as Chang Min started thrusting inside him. Chang Min’s hands moved up, holding onto Ye Xun’s hips as he started pounding into him. 

 

The sounds of moans took over the room, covering up everything else. 

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Ye Xun started rocking his hips more, following the rhythm of Chang Min’s thrusts. He peered down at Chang Min, taking in the man’s flustered expression as Chang Min’s darkened eyes held nothing but unadulterated lust that stared back at him. 

 

A lustful smirk started to appear on aye Xun’s face as he said, “I knew you would love the way my insides clenched around you.” Ye Xun tightened around Chang Min to emphasize his point. 

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Chang Min cried out from the move, his nails leaving more marks on Ye Xun as he felt closer to climaxing. He parted his lips, looking at Ye Xun with eyes that said, “kiss me.” 

 

Ye Xun kissed him, his tongue instantly exploring Chang Min’s mouth. His tongue rubbed against Chang Min’s, almost halting in his movement when he felt a hand wrap around his length, rubbing it. 

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They were both reaching their climaxing point as Chang Min grew faster with his thrusting. Even his hand on Ye Xun’s member was close to reaching his pounding speed. 

 

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They separated from the kiss as Ye Xun went towards Chang Min’s neck, sucking on it. “N-ah, again.” Chang Min let out. But he did not stop Ye Xun from leaving love bites on his neck; he needs to start investing in turtlenecks at this point. 

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And when he felt Ye Xun’s biting his neck, Chang Min ended up climaxing as he grabbed Ye Xun’s hips, holding him down as he let his release out inside him. Ye Xun rolled his hips into a circle, clenching hard on Chang Min as he milked him. 

 

Chang Min moved his hand faster, pinching Ye Xun’s tip, causing Ye Xun to climax all over his hand. Once they both calmed down, Chang Min let Ye Xun’s hips go, slipping out of him. 

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He could feel his seed slipping out of Ye Xun, landing on him. His length twitched from the feeling. Ye Xun rested his forehead on Chang Min’s shoulder once again, catching his breath. Feeling liquid moving down him caused Ye Xun to shiver. 

 

Ye Xun slipped his hand down, grabbing Chang Min’s member, feeling it twitch in his hand. “Round two?” Ye Xun asked. 

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“Yes.” 

 


 

The rest of the weekend went extremely fast as they spent the whole experience having sex in different areas. When they went to the sauna the following day, they were the only ones inside.  xM7Saf

 

Chang Min ended up with his legs wrapped around Ye Xun’s waist as Ye Xun fucked him inside the warm room. Chang Min had to cover his mouth, keeping his moans muffled as Ye Xun pounded into him. 

 

He ended up almost passing out from too much heat overtaking his body.  8wUSpb

 

Then, not wanting to just spend their time at the hotel and spa, Chang Min and Ye Xun decided to go out for the movies, shopping, and eating. But, they did not get that far when Ye Xun parked in the mall’s parking garage, bringing Chang Min to the back of the car to have sex. 

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Even though they were quiet, and the car windows were tinted, anyone could tell what was happening due to the car rocking.  mOopR8

 

Let’s not mention the movies that had Chang Min in the back, on his knees, taking Ye Xun in his mouth. 

 

And when they went back to the hotel, they slept together in every corner of the room and bathroom.  wMfL0V

 

By the time they had to leave, Chang Min was tired and had to wear a turtleneck AND scarf around his neck. He is going to have to ban Ye Xun from his throat. 

 

Ye Xun leaned over after he buckled himself, kissing Chang Min’s cheek. “Ready to go back?”  GndDN7

 

“Yes. I think you killed my hips, though.” Chang Min commented, leaning back in his seat as he closed his eyes. 

 

Ye Xun smirked, “Is that a bad thing?”  GPlvHx

 

Chang Min huffed, shaking his head as he chose to ignore Ye Xun’s response. “Just start driving.” 


Now, we are going to go back into the story.

Also, I started a stupid short story. Because I honestly have been depressed over my writing for a year now and thinking of taking a year off of writing because I believe my writing sucks. Well, I decided to make a dumb story to give myself some psychological (?) break. If you want to read it, it is on Tapas: here is the link. dn13LB

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9 comments

  1. The only way to improve is to stay with it. If you drop it now you will lose your momentum and it will be harder to start all over. You write well and don’t underestimate yourself. I appreciate your writing and so should you😀

  2. Don’t give up. I really like your story ideas for the two couples. You have us want to know what happens next. Ive found the psychological trauma interesting and I’m looking forward to the resolution of this. Great job. PS I’ve read poor writing and yours isn’t it.

  3. Aaaaaah but I really love what you write!! I’m bad with words so idk what else to say…. but I really love your books!!

  4. I’m sure you know that your self doubt is a separate entity from your writing talent? Just in case, you should know that I’m old, experienced and picky about books and sex. I don’t feel like I have time to waste forcing my way through inferior work. If you’re exhausted then definitely a break is a good idea, but your writing is solid. I identify with Min-Jun a lot, and I love that he’s comfortable and aggressive with Ye Xun.

    • I am trying to get my self-doubt under control. When I end up in my depressive moods, I always question everything I do. I just need to give myself a break to think.

      But, thank you so much.

  5. I checked out the story you posted on Tapas – it’s very funny and has a great natural rhythm to it. Looking forward to reading the rest!